Re: Colt's Return: 07/22/14 - Move to Graveyard (Updated)

[karlissa]

Loads of the pictures are missing on page 10

[sdhoey]

Something has happened with my photobucket settings!! I'm in the process of figuring out now. I hope I can it figured out.

[sdhoey]

Thanks Karlissa for telling which page. I can now try to figure out what is happening here.

[sdhoey]

I will be updating this with a ending soon. Rayvn did a no no and so Colt's return has come to an end. After all the bugs, glitches it was she that got into the ambrosa..

[Rhoxi]

I was wondering what she did to mess things up (saw your new story), but now I know: ambrosia. That's terrible! Anyone else feel that it's kind of fitting that a descendant of Raven's would be the one to ruin it for Colt? He played with fire, and he got buuuurned. Well, it'll be fun to see Rayvn redeem herself. Best of luck in your new dynasty!

[sdhoey]

Special Announcement coming soon. 

[sdhoey]

Colt: She looks, So young, so preserved. Is she?
Francine: Dead? No honey, she is in stasis. It's a type of sleep that helps her to heal and her body to function without food or water. She is very much alive.



Francine: I know it's hard on you, but they where both in very bad shape when Joe brought them here. I would say they are at 85% now.
Colt: And dad?
Francine: He was worse. I wasn't sure he would make it his first night here. But your mother, she nursed him so he could stand on his own two feet to get in the Stasis Chamber.



Colt: Everytime we moved forward, they took it out on him.
Francine: Colt there is something you need to know. Raven Goth, is the one that got your Father to Joe.



Hearing that, Colt turning and stood between his parents and slide down the wall to the floor.

Colt: Why? Would does she have to gain?
Francine: We are not sure of her purpose, but she said that her son and granddaughter did not need to pay for past of the elders. And she was gone.
 

Francine: She wants you, but can not have you. For your heart belongs to her sister.
Colt: My heart will always belong to Anges. She is the other reason I need to finish this.




Francine: Come!! Enough for now! you must be hungry son.
Colt: I am a little hungry.



Colt: What is sam hill is this thing? Some sort of food laser? *AGH*

[sdhoey]

Okay, Colt and I have been talking. Since we have put in long hours and many weeks/months/years into this project, and it's not a official for the score HOF Dynasty try. Colt made me contact one of the Moderators, (Trip) and I got permission to go continue on from before Rayvn ate the Ambrosia. I want to finish this.

Also, someone got into my photobucket account and messed with my settings on my albums, That is why alot of pictures have gone missing. I am going to try my best to get them back up and showing asap.

[sdhoey]

After having his dinner and saying his goodbyes, Colt left. He went to City Hall to look thru the historical records for Appaloosa Plains.



ME: Just what was it you where looking for mister?
Colt: Nothing, just wanted to see if everything was in order.



Colt: It's all gonna be just fine.
ME: I know that look, and it's not good!! Your up to something.


Colt: Come on woman, we are heading out to the edge of town. I have to check out that craft that my mom landed in.




ME: Um, you know they call this a wasteland for a reason don't you?
Colt: Scared?
ME: No


ME: Do you know where it is?
Colt: I have to look for the pieces to the key, it shattered into 4 pieces.
ME: Great!!


First pieced found


Second piece


The third piece


Colt: What are those things?
ME: Nanites. You can catch them
Colt: Cool


Colt: *Giggles* What is this? A laughter plant?


ME: You need to move on and get busy, the sun is coming up soon.
Colt:*laughing* Hang on


Just after sunrise, The fourth


Next stop!


Colt: Okay, that should do it. *click*




The doors move backward and  blast of cool air blows out.



ME: And of course, you just walk right on in like theres nothing inside that attack you!!
Colt: Oh please stop with that mess and come on.


Colt: What in the name of all that is evil is this place??

[sdhoey]

Taking a seat in front of the screen, Colt spoke a command, "Activate" A soft familiar voice came over the speakers and a holograph like movie begin: "My name is Janice Brooks, If I do not survive this flight, please find my son and tell him I love him." She went on to tell the story of when she was taken by Grim and given to the creepy little girl that everyone called the Boss. She explained of the torture she went through knowing that Tony was a Grim now and being made to rip the souls of his own sons family and then how once the boss found out that he had compromised that, he was punished and she was sent away only to be rescued by Joe Black." Not able to handle anymore, Colt turned it off. Sat and stared at the screen.



He stood up and moved from room to room, in each room he found artifacts that must have been worth alot of money. Books that told of the Boss's secrets.

 



One by one, he collected them till nothing was left in the ship, he turned walked and vowed that he would never look to that ship again and his mother would not go thru that again.






Back at the Community  Housing Unit Colt goes up the roof.

ME: What are you thinking?
Colt: It's time to go home, to complete this and get them out of here.


Colt fire up the portal






Took a deep breathe and stepped in...





Then he was gone

[sdhoey]

Unfortunately, I have to say so long to my file. A lot of the pictures in story have gone missing. I have saved all my family members to bin and on my media fire account. I am going to continue with Ravyne's story, as soon as I can.

So please move to graveyard. *sighs* 

[Trip]

You fought a good fight to keep them going. Sigh.

I'm moving this story to the Graveyard at the author's request. The author can revive it at any time by contacting a moderator.