Author Topic: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1  (Read 14740 times)

Louise56

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #45 on: December 25, 2012, 05:28:39 AM »
What have she done with the kids soccer ball? I don't think I like her very much lol.

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #46 on: December 25, 2012, 04:20:26 PM »
What have she done with the kids soccer ball? I don't think I like her very much lol.

Me either!  I generally don't take instant dislike to a character but I think I'm willing to make an exception.  That poor simki with the groceries.  He proabably has broken eggs on the sidewalk now. :(
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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #47 on: December 28, 2012, 10:28:32 PM »
What have she done with the kids soccer ball? I don't think I like her very much lol.

She was interrupted before she could do anything lol, couldn't let her mess with children you know :)

Sorry for the long absence :) Christmas and all that haha. Here is the next chapter. Oh and also, if anyone who is reading the story and is good at making sims would like to make any of the sims from the story, just let me know. I seem to run into roadblocks with making sims, they always seem to look the same and I would rather the characters be more… meaningful than copies of each other with different hair colours or something lol. Ok anyway enjoy!

Chapter - Tir

Tir felt the dull throbbing from his abdomen before he even opened his eyes. He looked down first, vision blurred, and noticed several cloths wrapped around him. He could not remember how he had gotten into this bed, the last thing he remembered was -

- The alley! -

He grew more alert instantly, and the blur began to clear from the room. To his side was a small table, on which his cloak and vest rested. There were indeed several clothes wrapped tightly around Tir's stomach and a few around his arm. He was sitting in a small bed, comfortable but very old. To his other side was a small dresser, and next to it was a chair.

He tried to get up to reach for his cloak but an acute pain from his chest halted him. He fell back onto the pillow cushion and took a few deep breaths, determined to try again. Before he could though the door opened.

A girl walked in holding a few cloths and a bucket of what looked like water. She walked a few feet before noticing that he was looking at her and then stopped in her tracks. Her eyes darted around for a second before coming back to meet his. It took Tir a moment before he recognized her, she was the girl from the alley.

"I… I know you," he looked right at her.
She did not answer, but stood clutching at the cloths in her hands.
"Back at the alley, what… what happened?"
"Begging your pardon sir, the two men, they ran, and I… you could not move, so I brought you back here."
Tir looked at the girl, she looked strong to be sure, but skinny nonetheless, there was no way she could carry him more than a metre.
Tir tried again to sit upright but again clutched at his chest.
"But how… did you…"
The girl's face flushed, she turned away from him and looked nervous. Then she fell to her knees.
"Please sir, forgive me, I… I didn't know what else to do, there was a wheel barrow nearby and I… well you were so pale, and I looked around I did, but there was no -"
Tir reached out and grabbed her hand and the girl stopped speaking immediately.
"It's okay," he smiled, "my name is Tir, what's your na-"
Of House Zulan," the girl whispered, looking from Tir to his cloak and back.
He looked at his cloak, it was torn but the sigil of House Zulan was yet clear to see. Tir looked back at the girl.
"What can I call you?" he asked again.
"My… my name is Riyantisse," she murmured, yet looking at the floor.
Tir reached out his free hand and lifted her chin, "Thank you," he smiled.

Ria offered Tir her home to recover, to which he graciously accepted. When she tried to move him into the master bedroom though, he told her he was more than comfortable where he was. It took a few more days before Tir could muster the energy to leave the bed, but once he did he was out and about. Ria did not say much at first, but after a while and much insistence from Tir, she quit referring to him as sir.

She lived with her mother and brother in the Natrium, where her family owned a small tavern. Though it was much smaller than what Tir was used to certainly, Tir liked it there. It… felt like a home, more of a home than any Tir had known. Ria's mother and brother were kind and Tir very much enjoyed their company. On the seventh day he was there, Ria told him she was heading to the market. When he insisted on joining her though, she adamantly protested, to no avail. When Tir offered to clean up at the shop, Ria looked horrorstruck.

"But… but you mustn't, I can do it, certainly."

Again Tir insisted and again Tir won. But when he tried to use the broom to clean the windows, Ria burst into laughter before she realised what she was doing but quickly stopped when she saw Tir's confused face.

After a week, Tir was feeling much better, able to move his arm without any pain in his chest and Ria had finally began to call Tir by his first name. Tir accompanied Ria to work every day and every night they would walk back together, often sitting outside after supper and talking for the whole night. Tir did not know what he was doing here, but he knew one thing though, he did not care to leave.

Next chapter - Yonri
Chapter after - Effina

I created a small list of the remaining characters that will have chapters titled after them. This doesn't mean that these are the next chapters, but I thought it would be good to allow you guys an idea of what is to come :)
Remaining characters (in no order, their chapters won't be in a row, should be in between existing characters) -

Ka'Yinaye - Master of Coin, Small Council
Olliana Bal'Neisacan - Dowager Empress
Gerita - Simki fealtor
Frarin - Simki merchant
William - Simki native

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #48 on: December 29, 2012, 12:23:13 AM »
Great update.  I've enjoyed your story so far but I am getting a bit confused about the cast.  (My age is showing)  Given that we're in a new world alien to us (my assumption so correct me if I'm wrong).  Can you provide us with a brief synopsis of the main people or at least PM me?
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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #49 on: December 29, 2012, 06:14:16 AM »
Great update.  I've enjoyed your story so far but I am getting a bit confused about the cast.  (My age is showing)  Given that we're in a new world alien to us (my assumption so correct me if I'm wrong).  Can you provide us with a brief synopsis of the main people or at least PM me?

You are not the only one haha, I noticed that I wrote that Tir was in House Rikarn but he is actually in House Zulan sigh, I really need to maintain notes. So actually thank you for the excellent idea, I will create a long list of characters :D

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #50 on: December 29, 2012, 06:31:03 AM »
Characters -

Chapter title characters -

Nore - one of the three in the main group of friends, Simki native, at the moment working at a restaurant in the Natrium
Zorina - nicknamed Zor, one of the three in the main group, works at a book store, also a member of the Glorylost
William - one of the three in the main group, at the moment has been missing since the coming
Effina - eldest daughter of House Lanark, the richest Neyreen of Yonkori
Jirard - ranking official in the Chantry, head of the Temple of the Prophet Najrasi, adept at the use of magic
Tir - youngest son of House Zulan, northern Neyreen of Yonkori
Yonri - Neyrn of House Lanark, head of one of the richest Neyreens in Neisacan
Rybelle - Judicar and magus, very adept at the use of magic
Ka'Yinaye - Neisacan noble, member of the Small Council and Master of Coin
Olliana - Dowager Empress, mother of Ashelia and wife to Gaston III, Emperor of Neisacan
Gerita - Simki who chose to bend the knee to Neisacan rule, realtor
Frarin - wealthy Simki merchant

Secondary characters -

Edrion - eldest son and heir of House Lanark
Ashelia - heir to the throne of Neisacan, only child of Emperor Gaston III and Empress Olliana
Elizabeth - Zorina's not-so-intelligent friend who works with her at the bookstore
Thor - member of the Glorylost, usually watches the door
Mattheiu - leader of the Glorylost in Yonkori
Mrs. Lannas - a member of Brother Jirard's congregation
Onirias - Grand Chanter of the Yonkori Chantry
Janesse - Neyrn of House Zulan and mother to Tir
Geoffren - Neyrn of House Rikarn
Krisnof - a Neisaci who frequents the restaurant at which Nore works
Riyantisse - nicknamed Ria, is the girl that Tir was trying to rescue

Will of course amend this as the story continues :)

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #51 on: December 29, 2012, 01:48:54 PM »
This is exactly what I needed.  Thanks for putting it together for me.
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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #52 on: December 29, 2012, 03:35:53 PM »
I'm glad Tir is ok. I love the update.

As for creating sims I can give you a nice tip. The premade sims in the bin is no bad looking at all. You can take a child or teen and age them up.
You will be surprised at the cute sims you find. You can even change the gender, some of them look quite nice as the opposite gender lol.

Thanks for the list of characters, it is a good idea to put it on the first page.
In a day or two I will forget where to look for it lol.

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #53 on: December 29, 2012, 11:36:21 PM »
Ok so I went and created most of the titular characters. I also redid a lot of the old ones with new clothes or in some cases new hair to better match the new story. I do not have time to act out the story at the moment so for now enjoy the sims just uh... standing around haha. I figured it would at least be nice to see what they look like in the world :) Enjoy!

Brother Jirard



Edrion's new outfit



Rybelle



Neyrn Yonri Bal'Lanark





Tir Bal'Zulan



Effina's new hair



Nore's new outfit



William's new outfit



Zorina's new outfit


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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #54 on: December 30, 2012, 10:52:54 AM »
You've done a very good job with the sims! They don't look similar at all.
All the outfits look awesome! ;D

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Re: Diaries of a Simki - Series 1
« Reply #55 on: June 10, 2013, 11:39:41 PM »
Wow you have invested a lot in this file. I hope you still update ?!
I love this forum and just want to say thank you to everyone! :) Have a great rest of your day!

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