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Offline lonelygoddess42

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Under Control
« on: August 24, 2013, 06:26:16 PM »
Melissa and Devon have been best friends since they were in the womb, and their parents have been best friends for longer, so it was no surprise when they decided to move in together after graduation. The two of them know life without the security of their parents and childhood restrictions would be hard, but it would be easier if they had each other for support through difficult times.

Melissa has dreams. Big dreams, and she won't let anything or anyone get in the way of her fame. Devon has dreams, too, and Melissa is a part of them. Melissa is gorgeous, strong willed, and free spirited; and it takes a lot to distract her from reaching her goals. Devon has been in love with Melissa since high school, but will falling in love with him get in the way of Melissa's plans? All he has ever wanted was to see her happy. Lately, keeping his heart under control has taken it's toll. Devon can't hold back any longer, and yet he can't risk jeopardizing Melissa's happiness. Even if it means sacrificing his own.
I don't where I'm going, but I'm on my way.

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Re: Under Control
« Reply #1 on: August 24, 2013, 06:29:15 PM »
That's an interesting beginning.  I'd like to see how this develops.   :)
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Re: Under Control
« Reply #2 on: August 24, 2013, 06:44:51 PM »
Thanks :) I'm playing it now so we'll see how it starts out.
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« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2013, 11:06:41 PM »
Sounds good. Please keep an updated.

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Re: Under Control
« Reply #4 on: September 14, 2013, 03:49:47 PM »
Melissa Has started on the path to becoming a vocal legend, but it's not easy. She faces a world of rejection everyday, and everyday Devon is there to cheer her up. he always knows how to make her smile. Devon gives her flowers and asks her to watch the stars often in order to make his feelings a little more apparent. So far, Melissa just takes it as friendly gestures and doesn't suspect anything more.
I don't where I'm going, but I'm on my way.