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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story
« Reply #30 on: May 13, 2013, 12:35:19 AM »
Poor her. I really don't know what to do when I reading her story...
Hope everything will be better to her.
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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story
« Reply #31 on: May 13, 2013, 07:59:24 AM »
I wonder if the falling feel is purely emotional or if some of it is the lingering effects of the time travel...



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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story
« Reply #32 on: May 19, 2013, 07:15:47 PM »
What Happens When I Sleep

I was painting. When, when Aaron called me. He said, "Go to bed,"
I don't know why I did as he said. I, I just did.



And, and something was different. Something, something was wrong. The walls, and the bed. They were wrong, different.



I, I appeared, I appeared somewhere, fenced, and large, and empty. But there, there was a little hut. And, and I walked to it.



As I walked an unusual pattern appeared, appeared in blue, across the ground. But, I, I trudged on.



And, in the, the hut, it was small, and dank, and eerie. All over the wall there was, there was paintings. Horrible, gruesome, paintings. And something was wrong with the floor. Now, now I can't quite name it. But the floor scared me.



In one corner there was a, a LLAMA. I checked the options for places to go, and it simply said, "Somewhere"



And on the other side,there was a, a staircase. With who knows what down there.



And on the top step, there was a skeleton, skeleton rattle. On it was a note bearing the words, "Shake me," It felt so very Alice in Wonderland. As I shook it a noise rang, rang out. It was like a little girl, but also like Aaron, that son of a llama.

As you ring me you shall hear!
Trapped in a barrel, you shall feel!
Two options, you shall choose!
Through the lLLAMA, no change, your life shall be!
Down the steps, horrors you shall see!
But better your life may turn out to be!




I stepped down on the first step, but then changed my mind. I wanted, wanted to take the LLAMA instead. I, I lifted my foot, but it would not let me set it on the top landing again. So, so I tried to step back on the top step but it was like, like magnetic force, was propelling my foot away. It would, would only land on the next step. After that I, I could not lift that foot again. So, I went down, because down, down was the only way I could go.
Down to the yet to be seen horrors.


This, this falling sensation. It's constant. Why, why do I  fall?

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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story
« Reply #33 on: May 19, 2013, 07:24:10 PM »
Creepy.  I always love Alice in Wonderland imagery  :=)

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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story
« Reply #34 on: May 20, 2013, 12:23:40 PM »
OOhh super creepy being called by the voice of your dead boyfriend in a dream? I'm not sure I would go down the rabbit hole Alice! Great update did you find your creators for your new project? I'd be interested if not :)

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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story
« Reply #35 on: May 20, 2013, 06:51:27 PM »
I think I'm covered. Thank you for the offer.

My Name's Not Alice!

Two directions. Two, two ways to go. I, I feel it all fall on me, so many,so many horrors are beyond these, these corridors.



I go left, no, no I go right. I just want to give up. But if I, if I sit down, something, something bad, will happen.



I, I get the most, most foreboding feeling. I'm going to see, see something.
GAH! What, what is it? I, why I, why am I so scared? It's horrible, horribly ugly, I know, something. Something, somethings happened...



I run, run away. I'm so scared. Tired! I'm, I'm tired.



I see, see the most terrible sight. That poor creature, trapped. why must it be there. Can't I, can't help it?



I, I feel a floaty feeling. Am I going to help, help it? Or am I to, to join it?



No, no, no, no! Don't, please, let, let me. I, I need to help it! The mirror puts me down. The mirror was taunting it! I break the mirror.



I sprint away, it is too much. I'm crying so much! Oh, Aaron! You son of a llama, I know you did this! Why, I miss you so much. Why did you let this happen? I love you. TELL ME! Tell me, something...


Just remember this my dear!
I, I never wanted this...
Please, tell me, you still love, me.
I only want the best...

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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story
« Reply #36 on: May 20, 2013, 06:54:39 PM »
I like the wardrobe shift at the end where she is formal, but still has the gloves for that "edgy" look.  Or maybe her hands are wrapped for fighting...?



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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story
« Reply #37 on: May 20, 2013, 07:50:06 PM »
No, not fighting. She's is so against violence. But yeah, it does give an interesting image.

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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story
« Reply #38 on: May 21, 2013, 03:53:00 PM »
Familiar




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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story FINISHED!
« Reply #39 on: May 21, 2013, 09:07:36 PM »
Nice ending Swirl-Girl!!! So it was all a dream huh? Just like Alice in Wonderland. Way cool.

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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story FINISHED!
« Reply #40 on: May 21, 2013, 09:12:08 PM »
It wasn't a dream.  The basement is reality and all the tuff with the two gentlemen was the dream.  OR maybe Squirt is the dream and the Sims are the ones dreaming...

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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story FINISHED!
« Reply #41 on: May 21, 2013, 09:29:01 PM »
If it was all a dream from the beginning, how did she end up in Christopher Steel's bed?  (I've played that Sim so many times, I'd recognise that bedroom anywhere.)
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Re: Distance Divided by Time: This is My Story FINISHED!
« Reply #42 on: May 22, 2013, 06:31:09 PM »
Well, I wouldn't quite say The End. Just a soft end like, thend.
It could quite possibly be a dream sent by Aaron, who was possessing her at the time. Or maybe it was a dream, in a dream, and she is really just Christopher's wife, as in one night she went to bed, dreamed she was in the 60's, then traveled to the future and met Chrissy again!
Sorry, I'm sounding like Pippin. ;)
OR, Time just clocked her in the face, and now she's just living in an air pocket of paradox!

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