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TheTripWasInfraGreen

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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter The one who watches Dec 4th
« Reply #30 on: December 07, 2012, 07:38:53 PM »
Yeah, I totally win at this guessing game. :P
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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter A long time ago in Twinbrook.
« Reply #31 on: December 07, 2012, 07:42:34 PM »
Quote from: TheTripWasInfraGreen on December 07, 2012, 07:38:53 PM
Yeah, I totally win at this guessing game. :P
Yeah they are pretty obvious aren't they.

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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter A long time ago in Twinbrook.
« Reply #32 on: December 07, 2012, 07:57:19 PM »
I don't have Twinbrook, so I have no idea. :(
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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter A long time ago in Twinbrook.
« Reply #33 on: December 07, 2012, 09:10:20 PM »
I think I know one or two  . . I've never really played in Twinbrook. Guess I know what town I'm playing in next!
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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter A long time ago in Twinbrook.
« Reply #34 on: December 07, 2012, 11:21:09 PM »
Quote from: SadieHamming on December 07, 2012, 09:10:20 PM
I think I know one or two  . . I've never really played in Twinbrook. Guess I know what town I'm playing in next!

Ditto.  I played it once when I was a newbie.  Must give it another try.
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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter A long time ago in Twinbrook.
« Reply #35 on: December 08, 2012, 02:57:52 AM »
I play Twinbrook a lot. I know who the men are, not so sure about the women.
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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter A long time ago in Twinbrook.
« Reply #36 on: December 08, 2012, 05:51:10 AM »
I aged some of the townies down a few life stages.

The first one is Harwood Clay. The second is Juan Darer the third picture is Milly Pidgin and her daughter Dilly.The last picture is Anna Lizza Riddle. For the purposes of this story Anna-Lizza is married to Harwood Clay they have a daughter called Eloise.

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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter A long time ago in Twinbrook.
« Reply #37 on: December 08, 2012, 06:00:00 AM »
I didn't realize Milly is so pretty! Wow. :o
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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter A long time ago in Twinbrook.
« Reply #38 on: December 09, 2012, 07:25:59 PM »
Like mother like daughter.


Despite living in a house with five other people Dilly Pidgin had never felt more alone.There was perfect little Princess Eloise with her perfect nose and her perfect hair.The way she walked around with that superior look on her face that said I know who my dad is,you don't. She hated her and all the stupid adults that lived in the stupid house.

Her mum wasn't much better she never had time to spend with Dilly,oh no she was far too busy trying to capture a new father for Dilly.

Dilly most certainly did not want a new father especially one that looked like Juan. She found it highly amusing to see the look on her mums face when even Juan failed to fall for her mums charms.

As for Eloise's perfect family Dilly could see the cracks starting to show. Even though she was only a kid she knew that people who properly really in love didn't look the way that Harwood did when he hugged their wife. She overheard her mum gossiping with the maid about how things were not as rosy in paradise as some people liked the world to think. She even said that if Anna-Liza didn't stop raiding the cookie drawer late at night she would pile all the weight back on that she lost for the wedding.

Milly glared at Juan how dare he how dare he think that he was too good for her. She was beautiful she was young she was perfection. Well he would pay one day he would pay.

Dilly couldn't believe that Juan thought he had the right to ground her. As she gazed up at him contempt in her blue eyes Dilly swore revenge. It may take her a long time but she was patient she could wait.

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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter A long time ago in Twinbrook.
« Reply #39 on: December 09, 2012, 07:32:55 PM »
Ah, how the plot thickens.

I never thought much about the history behind Milly and Juan, so this story is definitely a new perspective for me.
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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter Like mother like daughter.
« Reply #40 on: December 10, 2012, 07:34:17 AM »
I really enjoy your story, Twinbrook is one of my favorite towns. :)
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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter Like mother like daughter.
« Reply #41 on: June 09, 2013, 11:10:02 PM »
Hey is this still active?

Just wondering, from what I have read its awesome!
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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter Like mother like daughter.
« Reply #42 on: June 10, 2013, 09:08:26 AM »
I'm loosing my best friend.


Anna:You don't know what it is like Juan,day after day it is as if I don't exist to him.
Juan:Anna you need to talk to Harwood.
Anna:I just want someone to love me.
Juan:Anna you know this is wrong.

Anna:Say you love me Juan!
Juan:Anna get off me.
Anna:You think I am ugly,a fat ugly blob just like he does.
Juan:Don't be silly Anna.
Anna:So now I am silly.

Harwood:What do you think you are doing with my wife.
Juan:Nothing man,we were just..I...she hugged me.
Harwood:Just a hug you expect me to believe that.
Juan:It is the truth.
Harwood:it is a lie and you know it.

Juan:Perhaps if you showed your wife some attention once in awhile she wouldn't throw herself at me.
Harwood:How dare you..get out of my house.
Juan:But..but..
Harwood:I said leave.
Anna:Harwood you can't!
Harwood:And you can go with him,you cheap...
Anna:Harwood no!
Harwood:One thing before you go,Anna.
Anna:What?
Harwood:A kiss goodbye.


Anna:Say something,husband.
Harwood:What do you want me to say?
Anna:Say you don't want me to leave.

Juan did not wait to hear what Harwood had to say,he walked out into the night and away from his best friend.



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Re: In the bleak midwinter.New Chapter I'm loosing my best friend.
« Reply #43 on: August 09, 2013, 08:58:01 AM »
Poor Anna! That was a very drama filled post! I've been away for a while, and now I get to catch up on my favourite stories  ;D
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