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Alysanne's Millions - Rags to Riches (Vet) (COMPLETE)
« on: November 22, 2017, 11:03:00 AM »
First attempt at a story on this forum. The rules are here. Thanks to oshizu and Playalot for the encouragement!

Chapter 1: Below
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16

Alysanne Stark and her pet beagle, Summer arrive at Tail’s End. “This can’t be it.” She looks around, the full horror of their situation beginning to dawn on her.


Summer glances up.

“It’s going to be okay, Summer,” Alysanne says and wishes she could believe what she’s saying. Her phone beeps and she sees it’s from an email notification.
As promised, the lawyer has sent her a copy of her estranged grandfather’s will. She’d been overwhelmed during the reading of it. “Sole heir,” she’d heard. “Two properties in Brindleton Bay,” the lawyer had read. Thoughts had raced through her head. A fresh start. A chance to rebuild her life. No worries. No cares. A great new home for her and summer and a retail property for the income. Now she reads the fine print.

“Uh oh. What have I gotten us into? If I don’t do everything exactly right, I lose the whole estate!”



Breathe, she tells herself. Just breathe. Actually, no. What she needs to do is get energized, not to relax. Doing some sit ups, she re-centers herself.
This is doable. Even with these crazy stipulations. “Seriously, Grandfather, just because Dad ran off and married an artist instead of that heiress you wanted doesn’t mean it’s not a perfectly respectable way to earn a living.”

Summer is alarmed, looks around wildly to see just who Alysanne is talking to. Alysanne comforts her.

Painting is out. Writing is out. Gardening is out. All the ways Alysanne actually knows something about and likes to do are out.

She loves animals. There’s nothing in here that says she can’t be a vet. Heaven knows there’s enough cats and dogs here and it’s like a public health emergency everywhere with rampant Repugnitis and Pristmatic Poop Plague. It would be easier if the retail property wasn’t right next to the state-of-the-art Brindleton Pawspital, but Alysanne knows she can do this.

Alysanne makes a plan, consulting the stipulations of the will. For the first time she smiles. Grandfather clearly had no idea about her time in the Scouts or that summer internship in college where she dug up rocks or her mother’s secret hobby of frog breeding. And Grandfather had no idea what Summer was capable of. She just needs a little training.



It’s hard, though. Alysanne is exhausted and Summer is filthy after they raid the neighborhood around Tail’s End and Willow Creek for resources.



“I can do this,” she says before she falls asleep on a bench. She’s going to prove Grandfather wrong and earn the whole legacy free and clear.

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Re: Alysanne's Millions - Rags to Riches (Vet)
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2017, 12:15:32 PM »
What a fantastic prologue!
I've also been considering Tail's End or one other lot. Since you've started here, I should do the other one.

Haha, yes, all the ways we usually spam income are banned.
I'm really looking forward to more! :D



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« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2017, 01:02:23 PM »
Woot, go Alysanne!!
Glad to see you taking that brave step to posting a story on the forum!!  Definitely off to a good start.
I rather enjoyed your premise with the requirements being tied into the grandfather's will and such.  Clever stuff!
Must say, I also like that Alysanne has a unique look/feel to her (which is something I always greatly enjoy).
Kudos!

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« Reply #3 on: November 22, 2017, 04:08:52 PM »
Very nice start, commasplice!  I'm going to start this soon, as well, but I am not very strategic at all!

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« Reply #4 on: November 23, 2017, 01:14:47 AM »
Oh fantastic start! *cheers enthusiastically*
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« Reply #5 on: November 23, 2017, 12:25:19 PM »
Thanks for all the positive feedback. I wish I could take credit for her look, but all I did was hit randomize a few times, up her weight to max, and tweak her hair and makeup a bit.

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« Reply #6 on: November 23, 2017, 12:37:29 PM »
One thing Alysanne has to say about this whole living off the land business, it’s that she’s getting her exercise in. With no TV and no computer or anything for fun, she’s jogging a lot with Summer. No stove means all she can really eat are salads. Nothing but salads. And she’s got to hand it to her beagle—Summer is game for anything. She just wishes Summer was a little more careful about what she gets into when she goes “hunting.” The trainset was great, but then Summer got sprayed by a skunk AND bitten by a squirrel. The latter forces her to spend some of her hard earned simoleons at the Brindleton Pawspital.

The vet gives her the side eye. “You’re the one building that clinic, aren’t you?”

Alysanne smiles weakly. It’s less than much at this point. She’s got an exam table and check in station that she found very much used on Craigslist and a trash can. That’s it.

“When you go out of business, give us a call, we’re always looking to expand.”

Alysanne leaves all the more determined to make a go of it.

She deliberately sets her prices lower than the going rate and that seems to help, but it’s so much harder than she thought it would be.



Her first patient is Rosie, who is an adorable French bulldog. Her owner, Brant, is very cordial at first. “My partner and I were thrilled to hear about a local vet opening up. Brindleton Pawspital is—” He stops as he looks around. “I love the outdoors, but . . .”

“This is temporary,” Alysanne says firmly. She has plans, big plans.

Rosie is healthy and just needs a preventative shot. Brant pays her and to her horror, immediately the money disappears. She calls the bank who refers her to the Brindleton Bay City Hall.

“Yeah, you had your pet on site,” the clerk tells her in a bored voice. “We have rules against that.”

Alysanne learns that it’s all part of some bogus scheme the city has cooked up to get revenue. The other vets are fighting it, but until the regulation is overturned, Summer’s going to have to stay at home.

What saves her is Catarina Lynx. Every time, Alysanne turns around, there she is with yet another sick animal.




Abiding by the stipulations of her grandfather’s will, Alysanne dutifully deposits half her profits from the clinic daily into her housing fund. She doesn’t mind too much. If she can’t be with Summer all the time, she wants her beagle to have the best.

Summer is deeply suspicious of the new refrigerator, though.   


It’s a total grind, though. Alysanne goes to work. She comes home and poor Summer spends her time trying to contribute by digging up things Alysanne can sell.


Alysanne hires Sidney Egan. She’s not her first choice, but her good buddy, Supriya Delgato isn’t available. She’s working for Brindleton Pawspital and can’t afford to live on the wages Alysanne has budgeted.

Supriya does have a bit of advice, though. “Treats. It’s all about the treats. That’s how Brindleton Pawspital turns such a huge profit. Let your new hire handle some of the basic cases and you can focus on crafting treats. And when you’ve got the budget to hire me, give me a call.”

Alysanne's crafting does start bringing in the money. She's able to pay for siding for the exterior and at least the clinic part is now enclosed, even if there's no roof.

But it doesn’t work like that. Sidney stands around like a statue. When she does take a patient, Sidney takes hours and hours. Training doesn’t help. Whether Alysanne praises or criticizes her, she doesn’t improve. Whenever Alysanne checks up on her, she gets a smart answer back. Finally Alysanne lets her go.

“I’ll get you for this,” Sidney promises.



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Re: Alysanne's Millions - Rags to Riches (Vet)
« Reply #7 on: November 23, 2017, 12:49:40 PM »
Ugh!  Unhelpful hired help is the worst!  I had a hostess for a restaurant who only showed up for 2 out of every 3 shifts, so I feel your pain.  I've hired on no vets at the clinic my dynasty household bought simply for that reason and I just have the fam do all the vet work.  Not sure if that would work as well for you, though.
Brant's response to the "outdoorsy feel" of the clinic was pretty great!

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« Reply #8 on: November 23, 2017, 01:07:05 PM »
Wow, I'm so impressed that you've already opened for business!
And your sim lives in a house!  With walls and a fridge!
I also note that Alysanne has started slimming down from all the jogging and salads!
(Sorry for all the exclamation points. I'm feeling very excited!!!)

It's so fascinating to see the different choices players make!  ;D

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« Reply #9 on: November 23, 2017, 01:18:11 PM »
Wow, I'm so impressed that you've already opened for business!
And your sim lives in a house!  With walls and a fridge!
I also note that Alysanne has started slimming down from all the jogging and salads!
(Sorry for all the exclamation points. I'm feeling very excited!!!)

It's so fascinating to see the different choices players make!  ;D

Keep in mind that I am not used to taking screenshots so quite a bit of time is passing. Also, I am playing for now with aging off.

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« Reply #10 on: November 26, 2017, 11:06:10 AM »


The house is coming together. Alysanne realizes that she, herself, is coming together. She’s trimmer than she’s ever been. “Guess poverty is good for something,” she says aloud.

Every second Alysanne has she spends with Summer. The training is tough, but soon Summer can sit, heel, and fetch. And with Alysanne’s own skill in pet training increasing, she finds that she can send Summer off to dig up all kinds of stuff from fossils to statuettes and crystals.



And then she gets an unexpected visit from Cory Schultz, her late grandfather’s attorney and trustee to the estate.

Before he can even say anything Alysanne knows this is not going to go well.

“The terms of the will require me to keep tabs on you.”



“Feel free to look around.” Up until this point, Alsyanne has been feeling pretty proud. Summer has her own pet door. She’s managed to build on not just another bigger room that’s serving as her own bedroom, but also an addition for the kitchen. There’s an actual, bonafide stove. She just bought a sofa—in cash.



Mr. Schultz lights his eyes on the frog tanks. “The will is very specific about sources of income.” He’s smiling, but there’s no warmth to it.

Alysanne pulls up the will on her phone. “Show me where frog breeding is prohibited.”

She can’t help but feel triumphant when he concedes that it’s a legit way for her to make money.



He interrupted her dinner, but no way is she going to offer him any. She sits down with him in the kitchen—of course, it’s the one room that still has drywall—and eats her mac and cheese.



“How much is the property assessed at?”

Alysanne stops eating for a moment. “$19,527.”

The sneer is back. “Only $330,473 to go then.”

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« Reply #11 on: November 26, 2017, 11:19:36 AM »
Wow, Cory Schultz is a jerk!  Don't worry, Alysanne, we're all cheering for you even if the nasty attorney is being...well, nasty.
Alysanne's looking great!  Summer has really gotten her in great shape (assuming that the jogs are a serious part of the weight loss and muscle toning).
The expression on Alysanne's face in that last shot is just perfect for the dialogue.  Great work!

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« Reply #12 on: November 26, 2017, 02:28:40 PM »
I love that Alysanne has gotten her weight down just by doing things with Summer! She's looking great and, with the shape of her face, she is very lovely.

Great narrative device with the lawyer! I'm really enjoying your story, commasplice!

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« Reply #13 on: November 27, 2017, 09:23:01 PM »


Mr. Schultz’s visit puts matters into perspective. Alysanne realizes she’s going to have to work three times as hard to make the vet clinic a going concern. She’s taught poor Summer every trick she knows and the beagle runs herself ragged bringing back anything she finds.


Alysanne forces herself to take Summer out for a jog. It’s only when she gets back and looks down that she realizes she was in her pjs the entire time. “And everyone was out today,” she says aloud in horror. “They all saw me.”

Focus, she tells herself. The clinic is looking better. She’s got paint on the walls and thanks to the killer business she’s doing in treats, she was able to buy a brand new exam table. There’s even a stereo in the waiting room.


She’s starting to know her regular customers and it’s getting easier to chit chat with them. Gradually, her ratings improve on Yelp and her business is picking up. She can even afford to hire Supriya now.



What kills Alysanne is how miserable poor Summer is back at the house.



“You keep feeding those stray cats,” Supriya says. “Just take one in. That way Summer will have a friend.”

Enter Balerion the Dread, who is adorable and loving, even if she will keep getting up on the counters. She shares Summer’s fear of the household appliances and a frustration with the never ending renovations, but that’s about it.



“I know it’s confusing the way I keep moving the furniture around, guys,” Alysanne says to them. “It’s only temporary, I promise.”

Her bedroom is functional. The addition had to be reconfigured and she had to temporarily sell the stove.

“I’m telling you, it’s all about the treats,” Supriya says as they’re waiting for their first customer of the day. “Look, set me crafting them and you can focus on the clients.”

Alysanne is stocking Swampwater Taffy when Catarina Lynx stops by, for once without a pet. Before she can even greet her top client, Catarina buys it all.



When not two hours later, one of Catarina’s brood comes in with a raging case of Swamp Mouth, she finally makes the connection.

“The treats,” she says to Supriya. “The treats are making the animals sick.”


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« Reply #14 on: November 27, 2017, 09:41:39 PM »
Oh heavens!  The treats are making pets sick?  Alysanne is either an evil genius or extremely unfortunate!
No worries about her roaming the neighborhood in her PJ's, she looks darned good in them!
May I inquire what rating your clinic is at right now?