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Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics: Introduction
« on: May 17, 2016, 06:47:56 PM »
Chapter 1: Introduction

Chapter 2: B.M. Blake

Chapter 3: Ariana the Brave

Chapter 4: Stella Sun

Chapter 5: Luna Moon

Chapter 6: Wait, Three?

Chapter 7: Ariana and Athena

Chapter 8: Anna

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So… this is my first time writing one of these. Warning- I might be clueless.
Please excuse my title. I could't think of anything else.
Spoiler Alert-
Zangtenor-Blake Family Tree
here goes nothing.
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Eric Princey Zangtenor-founder

he's an IF-oops. seems I've forgotten his traits.
Anna Fylet Zangtenor-founder's wife

she's a witch. I forgot her traits too.
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Introduction
hello. my name is Anna.

And I am a witch.
I come from a perfect genetics challenge, and I was not the heir-so I decided to start my own. Although, my genes weren't really that interesting, so we did prin-sorry, Eric's. you see, he was my imaginary friend when we were young, so as a toddler I named him Princey.

no one takes him seriously with that name. Honestly, he had a hard high school. ("I can hear you, Anna. You talk loud.") How sweet of him. complimenting/complaining about my loud voice. Enough about me. Let's get on with it.


This is our house in the supernatural town. (moonlight falls? i'm not sure.) Princey, who I think is athletic, is working on his skills in the indoor gym.

yes. his athletic is the martial arts uniform. deal with it. ("It's not that weird, is it?") No, Princey Eric. I think you look fantastic.
Then off to the city hall it is to change our names! No more being known as the Blakes.

Me: uh, Anna? finish the chapter. I have to get off sims now.
all right, all right. Here's Eric in his IF form playing catch with a kid who's name I don't know.

and that, my friends, concludes our first chapter. the next one includes… babies? I don't know.
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics: B.M. Blake
« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2016, 12:13:17 PM »
Chapter 2: B.M. Blake
I danced with Anna last night.

one thing led to another…

And…

we got a little carried away. anyway, we fell asleep soon after that. The next morning, Anna gave me a questioning look before going out and swimming in the pool.

I made some waffles for breakfast.

Maybe I'm not much of a cook, but…

They weren't that bad, were they?


I was pumping iron and Anna was practicing magic when something interrupted her.

I'm going to be a dad!
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After my pregnancy spin, I went to Aliester's elixirs.


my ice blast spell didn't go so well-I hope it won't effect my child!
but when I came home, a mysterious surprise awaited me.

a girl with odd hair was passed out on the doorstep. I could see several scratches and a very nasty cut. Feeling sympathy, I picked her up and bandaged her cuts. then I carefully tucked her into a spare bed.

Only then did I notice the note stuck to her clothes.
My daughter, Ariana. I will be back.
B. M. Blake
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics: Ariana The Brave
« Reply #2 on: May 24, 2016, 07:14:09 PM »
By the way, the traits are:
Anna-good, angler, hates the outdoors, loner, neurotic
Eric-mooch, green thumb, athletic, photographer's eye, star quality
Ariana-adventurous, night owl, daredevil
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Chapter 3: Ariana The Brave
Hi! I'm Ariana… Blake? Zangtenor? Who knows. I can't remember anything since waking up in a bed in a house with the Zangtenors.
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I talked to Anna about it. she says my mother's last name was Blake, which was Anna's maiden name.
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she gave me a new outfit. It was very nice of her, my old one was all scratched up. She also gave my hair a trim and fixed it up.
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Anna talked to Eric in whispers-I don't know what they said, but I caught my name. afterwards, she told me I could stay until further notice.
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Ugh. I had to go to school!
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After that strange girl, Anna and I needed a break. we went of to the spa to handle her back pain-and mine, for that matter! all that exercising…
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After my first day at school, I went to the playground to relax.
me: here comes Ariana spam!
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me: I love this kid!
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I'm not afriad of zombies! I am the brave warrior Ariana!
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After playing chess with her, i went to the festival to get my face painted.
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meanwhile, something was happening at home…
me: yes! finally! babies!(yes… babies in plural.)
Anna: hello! i'm in pain here!
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me: oh. sorry.
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and we're sparkling…
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girl!
let's walk outside…
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Girls!
welcome to the world, Stella and Luna Zangtenor.
their traits are:
Luna-good and clumsy
Stella-good and genius
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics: Stella Sun
« Reply #3 on: May 28, 2016, 09:25:25 AM »
Chapter 4: Stella Sun
The day started off when Anna brought my baby "sister" Stella up to the cake.
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she's sooo cute!
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next up was little Luna.
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she decided to be invisible. oooh, maybe she's powery like Anna!
me: it's called a witch, Ari.
whatever.
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yay, she's visible again!
she might even be cuter than Stella! How is this possible?
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uum… should I have walked in on this? probably not. whoops.
I'll just… go to the twin's room.
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they've both got streaks in their hair. that's unusual. Stella's got yellow and Luna's got blue.
Me: spam time!
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oh… school time!
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I practiced my spells until I was so tired I almost lit the house on fire! yikes! I'm not doing that again.
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But everyone knew who might do it.
no one can deny-There's something unusual about Stella Sun Zangtenor.
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics
« Reply #4 on: June 05, 2016, 09:21:00 AM »
So, hello anyone that is reading this! I'm trying to update my writing style. Also, I want to add a family tree to this. I got a Family Echo account, I just don't know how to get it to link to this website. I've tried and it keeps coming up as my account. If anyone can help me, that would be very much appreciated!
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Perfect Genetics Challenge: Luna Moon
« Reply #5 on: June 05, 2016, 11:28:30 AM »
Chapter 5: Luna Moon
Eric looked into the nursery. There she was-Luna.
He didn't know what he had been expecting. of course she was there.
But he still couldn't get it out of his head. Cornelia Goth taking Bryley Maria from her crib when all "Princey" could do was sit there as a doll and watch… it was terrible.
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He carefully took Luna from the crib to examine her highlights.
no, he thought. she couldn't be.
she is, Princey. The Witch of the Moon.
"Who was that?" whispered Eric Princey.
Just little old me-Although, you can't call me the watcher. I don't have that title. Call me PJHP.
"Ok, PJHP. What about Stella?"
Witch of the Sun, yes. Now stop asking questions. You always loved the spotlight far too much.

Luna stared out the window as they walked by. Where was Eric taking her? She began to cry.
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"Don't cry, Luna." He whispered. "I won't hurt you. You're safe."
He started walking outside. Luna had only been outside once-when she was born, during the night under a full moon.
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Where was he taking her?
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That was it. She had never been away from home. Never. She screamed louder this time.
Luna.
The voice in her head was stern and loud.
You're safe. I would never do anything unsafe, especially not to you. Now stop screaming. It's hurting the taxi driver's ears.
Luna stopped. Something about the voice controlled her.
You're just hungry. we'll feed you soon.
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They stopped and got out of the car. there was a great peacefulness about their destination. Luna liked it, especially under the full moon.

Meanwhile...

Anna stood up. "PJHP, what's happening?" she muttered.
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You're pregnant. Nothing to be worried about, You just need to be calm and change into some more fitting clothes.
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Hooray! Maybe we'll get the heir this time.

Luna saw the tall weird stone thing. If only she knew how to talk, she could ask her Dad what it was…
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It started to shake. suddenly, a translucent orange figure sprouted from it!
She was alone… where was Eric?
"I'm right here, Luna. It's all right."
Eric started talking to it. What was up with him?
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And, because she hadn't gotten a very restful sleep, she began to drift off…
The next thing Luna knew, she was talking to Ariana. It was daytime, and as usual, she felt less powerful.
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Ariana had woken up that morning feeling ill. she didn't feel like getting up, but she had to.
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when she did get up she felt woozy and wobbly.
"Ariana?"
The voice came to her as if through water. The world suddenly flipped upside down.
"Ariana!"
And the world went black.
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When Ariana woke up, everything was fuzzy. she blinked twice and stared at the newly focused wall.
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Ariana got up and doubled over. She raced to the bathroom as fast as her legs could carry her.
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She vomited into the toilet. Strangely, she felt better!
She suddenly saw double. Ok, maybe not. Back to the bed!
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When she felt ready, she meandered downstairs and found soup prepared for her.
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Ariana stuck out her tongue. Not her favorite, but she was feeling ok now.
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When Anna came home, Ariana felt her pregnant belly.
"Wow… multiples, I think! I'm so excited!" Ariana Squealed.
"Really?" Said Anna. "That's great!"
"Do I have to go to school today?" Said Ariana.
"No, I don't think so." Said Anna. "You might be feeling better, but we shouldn't take any chances. I'll tutor you, though, if that's ok."
Ariana nodded. "ok."
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Ariana smiled at her little sisters. They were polar opposites, but also best friends.
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Anna was downstairs watching television.
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Eric was playing with little Luna. They seemed to have a very strong bond now.
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no one was aware that their family was about to grow-by a lot.

aaand cut! wow. that was a loooong chapter. hooray for 23 pictures!
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics
« Reply #6 on: June 05, 2016, 12:47:18 PM »
So, hello anyone that is reading this! I'm trying to update my writing style. Also, I want to add a family tree to this. I got a Family Echo account, I just don't know how to get it to link to this website. I've tried and it keeps coming up as my account. If anyone can help me, that would be very much appreciated!

Hello there! When on your family's family tree click the "share" button in the next to the "save" button and it should give you options. You should see the option to copy the link and share it yourself. You use the link to share the family tree on the forum. Hope this helps! :)



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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics
« Reply #7 on: June 06, 2016, 07:20:01 AM »
That worked. Thank you!
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics
« Reply #8 on: June 16, 2016, 03:39:39 PM »
So, anyone who is reading this, I am starting a new story. I will probably get back to the Zangtenors soon, but my game took a curve I want to fix, and it will take time. Feel free to check out the other story!
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics: Wait, Three?
« Reply #9 on: July 08, 2016, 01:29:44 PM »
Alright everyone! It's not quite fixed but will be soon. And plus, my game is way ahead of this. (Ariana's YA and has moved out, twins are teens and have level 8 magic power.)
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Chapter 6: Wait, Three?
"Aaaargh!"
Eh, Anna? you al…. babies! aahh! Freak out! wait. I'm supposed to be helping you. well, I'm just showing my inner sim!
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"Arrrr! why does this take so long?!?"
Ooh! Anna! It's a, It's...
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A girl!
Next is…
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Another girl!
"Phew! That's over."
Er, Anna? Why don't you have the twins moodlet?
"I don't have the… Wha!"
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"Another one! Gerrr…"
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It's another girl, if you can't see.
"I'm pretty sure they can see."
Then we started the cake fiesta.
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Stella went first.
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She grew up into a beautiful child.
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Stop hiding behind your bangs! show us your awesome Anna's eyes! (which are my original founder, Alysse's eyes, by the way. but that dosen't matter, because Anna isn't carrying on that line. she had the wrong hair.)
(Then Stella told Ariana that the voice in her head said weird things. humpf.)
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up next was Luna, who currently has weird hair.
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What is smelly, Anna? We're Outside!
Luna was adorable too, and Anna decided to give her a little gift.
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"This is a moonstone, Luna. Use it wisely!"
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"Thanks Mom!"
The triplets, Artemis Stars, Athena Rose and Persephone Lily came next.
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whoever they're cheering for seems to be invisible.
Oh, it was Artemis. (Artemis is a mini Anna! Same eyes, skin and hair. And she's a witch!)
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Persephone is a mix, with sandy-brown hair and those unforgettable blue eyes. Princey's eyes.
And Athena… oh… let me check… Athena is our heir!!!!!
No more kids, Anna! Squeeeee! Athena's heir! Athena's heir!
*Clears throat* Sorry. Got a bit excited.
"More than a bit, I think."
Oh, be quiet Anna.
And because I failed to get a picture of them, here's one:
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It's not very good, but it'll do.
Luna, Anna, Ariana and Stella went on a trip to the new town playground.
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Yay! Skating!
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Only Anna and Luna made it to the sleeping over part without going home, but they were cold so eventually had to.
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I love this, by the way.
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Luna's got a Moonstone and Stella has a Sunstone! I. Love. It.
I leave you with a picture of Ariana's birthday. Outfits in the next chapter!
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics
« Reply #10 on: August 19, 2016, 10:17:16 AM »
Hello again!
I love seeing stories set in Moonlight Falls, there aren't nearly enough of them!
Well done on getting an heir on the second try, I'll look forward to seeing Athena grow up!
Glad to see you got the family tree problem sorted.
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics
« Reply #11 on: August 19, 2016, 01:35:05 PM »
Hi Nienor!
Yeah, I'm glad I got Athena too. Last time I did a perfect genetics challenge, I had three sets of triplets before getting my heir. Chaos with a capital C!
In my game, the triplets are teens. Artemis is literally a copy of Anna, Athena looks so interesting with the crystally blue eyes and purple hair, and Persephone is absolutely beautiful! Yes, moonlight falls is a really pretty and interesting town! The story will have lots of elements from supernatural, so I thought it was a good setting. I don't actually have dragon valley, so I'll look forward to the pointy-eared babies in your story!
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics: Ariana and Athena
« Reply #12 on: August 24, 2016, 12:03:40 PM »
Chapter 7: Ariana and Athena
Ariana sighed as she blew out her candles. She had always hoped that she would find her parents before her teen birthday.
I mean, blue hair. Not many sims can say that they have blue hair.
She forced a smile and looked at herself in the mirror. Her hair had grown a bit. Hooray! She didn't have to look like a boy anymore.
She picked out very dramatic outfits and looked apon the strange zombie-fairy. Ha.
Casual
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Formal
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Sleepwear
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Athletic
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Swimwear
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Outerwear
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Weird Fairy-Zombie
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"Uh, Percy-Jackson Harry-Potter? That's not an outfit."
Me: Oops. My bad.

Eric sat on the couch with Ariana.
"What's wrong, Ari? It's your birthday. You should be happy."
"It's just… I hoped I would find my parents, That's all."
"Anna is just afraid she'll be wrong. Ari… We know who your parents are."
"What? Who?"
"Did Anna ever tell you the story of her sisters?"
"You mean, Flora and Rosea? But she had six brothers. Lean, Steven, Evan, Brendon, Ember, And Mortimer. Right?"
"The story starts with a woman named Alysse. Obsessed with her amazing blue hair, she wanted to pass it down ten generations. She had one sister, Zinnia, who took her first set of triplets-Evan, Steven and Rosea. None had perfect genetics-When her household overflowed. Next, she had triplets-Anna Fylet, Flora Kaylee, and Bryley Maria.
But another woman lived in the town. Her name was Cornelia Goth. She wanted a daughter more than anything in the whole world. She had one toddler-Mortimer, Her son. But Gunther, her husband, refused to have another kid. She arranged a trade-in the middle of the night, She would take Bryley Maria, and Alysse would take Mortimer. it remained that way although Anna and Flora eventually found out. Mortimer and Bryley met when they were teens-they fell in love and, apon their young adult birthdays, got married. Bryley got mysteriously ill and round, before going back to normal. Several years later, you arrived. Ariana May Goth."
"Wow."
"Would you like to work out?"
"Ya."
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Me: Well. That was weird.
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"OOF!"
Me: So was that.
Ariana tickled her "cousin" Athena.
"Athena! Watch out for the claw!"
"He He!"
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"Wow, you're fearless."
Here are the imaginary friends playing with their imaginary friends.
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Stella takes after her Mom.
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So does Luna.
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Luna screamed. "aaah! Stella! The aliens are coming!"
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"Let's play The Humans 3 when we get home."
"Definitely."
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"Get in your tower!"
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"Of course, Mistress Stella.
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"Goodnight, precious Athena."
"Yay, Ari!"

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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics: Anna
« Reply #13 on: October 12, 2016, 09:29:41 AM »
Warning-This update will not have any pictures.

Chapter 8-Anna
The Grim Reaper. Luna knew him somehow.
"No, not Anna." Whispered Eric. "Please."
No, no, why did I do that? Ugh, I'm so silly. Argh! Luna, don't worry, I'll fix it. The Grim Reaper has a crush on you, By the way.
"Is that even possible?"
Not really, but chetanhaobijam lent me him. So there. I bent the boundaries of the universe. Hooray for me.
(I lied about there being no pictures.)
R.I.P Anna Zangtenor. I will fix this.
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Re: Zangtenors-Imaginary Friend Genetics: Introduction
« Reply #14 on: October 25, 2016, 01:20:56 PM »
Hmm... I don't think you're doing anything wrong? I like it anyway...
Perhaps increase the font size to size 12 as it's easier to read, and crop pictures so it's easier to see what's going on?
I also feel bound to recommend regular updates, although I know how difficult and annoying they are. (Like I can talk about that, though!)
Good luck - and don't give up!
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