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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 5: Exchanging Faces
« Reply #15 on: October 30, 2015, 08:57:32 AM »
Poor JJ, there was never an out for you. I guess deciding if he was lying or telling the truth was a risk Cindy needed to take. Hopefully she chose the right one.

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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 6: Star Crossed Lovers
« Reply #16 on: November 01, 2015, 06:08:28 PM »
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 6: Star Crossed Lovers
« Reply #17 on: November 01, 2015, 11:03:05 PM »
Who was the guy stepping on her heels, I wonder if he was watching Gabbi or just some impolite person .
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 6: Star Crossed Lovers
« Reply #18 on: November 05, 2015, 06:11:35 PM »
Just some impolite person :P Keith could have at least dressed up a bit.

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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 6: Star Crossed Lovers
« Reply #19 on: November 12, 2015, 01:13:07 AM »
It stops here?  Is there more?  Great story.
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 6: Star Crossed Lovers
« Reply #20 on: November 12, 2015, 01:05:30 PM »
I took a week off. I will have the next chapter up asap!

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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 7: Cosmic Love
« Reply #21 on: November 16, 2015, 09:16:46 AM »
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 7: Cosmic Love
« Reply #22 on: November 16, 2015, 11:59:53 AM »
Noooo, poor Gabbi, but Cindy was probably right to ground her... It's quite likely that Gabbi will find a way to sneak out, though.
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 7: Cosmic Love
« Reply #23 on: November 18, 2015, 06:06:06 PM »
I forgot how quirky this story is lol. The next chapter is one of my faves.

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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 8: Innocence Lost
« Reply #24 on: November 23, 2015, 12:30:12 PM »
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 8: Innocence Lost
« Reply #25 on: November 24, 2015, 11:19:25 PM »
Noooo, Gabbi!! Why did you have to check it out?

Cindy has some explaining to do
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 8: Innocence Lost
« Reply #26 on: November 26, 2015, 07:58:14 AM »
Congratulations on over 500 views :)
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 8: Innocence Lost
« Reply #27 on: November 27, 2015, 11:00:37 PM »
Thank you! Now to see what happens next. :)

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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 9: Runaway
« Reply #28 on: November 30, 2015, 09:23:44 AM »
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Re: The Man Under My Bed -- Ch. 9: Runaway
« Reply #29 on: November 30, 2015, 10:27:30 PM »
 :o Gabbi !!! I wonder if Keith and his mother know about his father. Hmmm... But then Keith would have gone straight to him
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