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Re: The Return of Brooks - Adventure in Gym Land Updated 01/07/16
« Reply #765 on: January 16, 2016, 11:10:53 PM »
i have to admit this is the first TS4 story i've read and you had me laughing so hard at times i nearly choked on said laughter. and then other times, like the deaths of those spares and helpers, i came so close to bawling my eyes out but then i'd move on and be laughing at something funny that would cheer me up again. i am DEFINITELY going to keep an eye on this as things progress. I've only ever enjoyed one other dynasty and that was a TS3 one by Schipperke. you are a brilliant writer. great job.

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Re: The Return of Brooks - Adventure in Gym Land Updated 01/07/16
« Reply #766 on: January 22, 2016, 10:57:03 AM »
I'm hoping to update soon. I'm having problems getting my pics to upload to photobucket. Not what I wanted to happen.

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I'm giving Imgur a try. Never used it, so bare with me as I get used to it.
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Re: The Return of Brooks - Img Check Please 01/22/16
« Reply #767 on: January 22, 2016, 11:53:47 AM »
I know I can see it, but I need to know if anyone else can see the pic?

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Re: The Return of Brooks - IMG Check Please Can you see it? 01/22/16
« Reply #769 on: January 22, 2016, 12:14:51 PM »
I can see this one.

Thank you @KRae Now I can finish uploading and get to moving along and get Kyle out of the way and Brody moving along.
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Re: The Return of Brooks - IMG Check Please Can you see it? 01/22/16
« Reply #770 on: January 25, 2016, 04:00:38 PM »
It's just a pic of Colt harassing errrr, training his grandson.  Can hardly wait for more.
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Re: The Return of Brooks - IMG Check Please Can you see it? 01/22/16
« Reply #771 on: January 25, 2016, 05:20:24 PM »
It's just a pic of Colt harassing errrr, training his grandson.  Can hardly wait for more.

LOL that's funny but true. Update coming soon. I have to sort my pics and write.
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Re: The Return of Brooks - The Sleeping Bush 01/25/16
« Reply #772 on: January 25, 2016, 07:38:00 PM »
Colt: Okay, Now I want you to take it up as high as you can, without falling off.



Brody: Like this?

Colt: That's it. now do that for about 60 seconds and then it's strength time.



Destiny: Ole man putting it to you I see.

Brody: Oh it's not that bad. It makes him happy.



Brody: He just wants to make sure I do my best to complete my requirements. I don't want to let him down.



Destiny: Here, Let me get a picture with you before he runs you to bones.



Brody: I love you Aunt Destiny. Your the best.

Destiny: I know, love you too little man.



Colt: Now that the love fest is over, lets get busy.



Brody: Pop pop, How many times have you been in love in your life? I mean really in love?



Colt: Well son, that's hard to say. I mean, I loved Red, your great gran with everything I have. But once in another simverse, I, I lets get to this workout now.

Brody: Yes sir.



Colt: Your not getting off that easy Romeo. Your in love aren't you?



Brody: *smirking* I am not discussing this with you right now.

Colt: Oh your gonna talk boy..



Brody: So, how does this leg thing work again?



Bush: *ZZzzzz*

What the?? Who is that brush? Rory has fell asleep in the bush.



What are you doing?

Kale: Play Sims Medieval. I needed a break from work stuff.




Have you and Kinley thought of getting married yet?

Kale: We've talked and we will let you know when we are ready.



Well, don't wait to long. Oh watch out for the pit monster.. It's always hungry.

Kale: Thanks. I just fed him a peasant so he's full now.

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Re: The Return of Brooks - Our Brody's In Love Update #2 01/25/16
« Reply #773 on: January 25, 2016, 08:43:41 PM »
Colt: How much longer do we have to keep up with this garden?

Until I say so.



Zoey: Morning Granddad, grumpy as usual I see.

Colt: You know it baby girl.



Colt: Don't you think you need some clothes on?

Zoey: Granddad, we are in our own backyard. Who's gonna see me?




*cough* Enjoy your little nap yesterday?

Rory: I don't have the faintest idea of what your talking about. I'm fishing leave me alone.




How's the homework going?

Brody: Almost done, gotta finish and meet some friends at the park.



I've been looking all over for you..

Rory: I came here for a reason. Don't you think you should go and check on my grandson at the park. Well, true, I guess I'll let you fish in peace.




At the park....

Brody: Hey guys, I made it..




Bun girl: Well Kristie, I'll see you at school tomorrow, time for work.

Brody: See you guys tomorrow. To bad you can't stay.



Brody: So do you think you passed that test today?

Kristie: Oh man, was that test hard. All I can do is hope I passed it.



Brody: Ah come on now, beside being the prettiest girl in class, your the smartest one.

Kristie: You are a charmer Brody Brooks.



*Buzz buzz*
Kristie: Oh I'm sorry, I forgot to turn off my alarm.

Brody: No problem, At least it wasn't going off in school.



Brody: I can't get over how lovely your hair is. That shade of red is gorgeous. Would like to watch the clouds with me?
 


Kristie: Thank you Brody, and I would be honored to watch the clouds with you.



Brody: That one looks like a cat riding a Llama.

Kristie: *giggles* Your right, it does. But I think they look like soft fluffy wisps of black silk, *clears throat* like your hair.



Brody: So, have you been to any of the new clubs over in Windenburg yet?

Kristie: Oh no, I want to so bad, but I don't want to go by myself.



Brody: *stretches* Yeah, I want to go too,



Brody: Maybe we can go together this weekend of something?

Kristie: Sure that would be great. *scoots closer*




Brody: Kristie? You know I really like you right?

Kristie: I really like you to Brody.



Brody: How about you and me, get together and have some fun?



Kristie: I think that would fantastic, my hunky handsome guy.



Brody: Hmm? Kristie? I, I,

Kristie: What is it Brody?



*First Kiss*



Kristie: Oh My!! *blows kisses*



Brody: Wanna go on a date?

Kristie: Sure. I'll go anywhere with you.


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Re: The Return of Brooks - Our Brody's in Love Update #2 01/25/16
« Reply #774 on: January 26, 2016, 12:55:32 AM »
Awwww, Brody and Kristie's first kiss!  <3
That "Attempt to seduce" social never fails to crack me up, though. Isn't that what Brody's doing after he asks her for a date?

Also, I'd like to ask an uninformed question.
I noticed in your Immortal Stats that you list the titles of cookbooks (for Zoey) but not their prices. Don't cookbooks have prices, too?

I hope Kristie turns out to be "the one" for Brody!

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Re: The Return of Brooks - Our Brody's in Love Update #2 01/25/16
« Reply #775 on: January 26, 2016, 01:07:59 AM »
Awwww, "Brody and Kristie, Sitting in a tree,  K I S S I N Gee."  This was adorable.
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Re: The Return of Brooks - Our Brody's in Love Update #2 01/25/16
« Reply #776 on: January 26, 2016, 03:27:17 AM »
I was like...but her face, we need to see her face. Oh no.... don't tell me we aren't going to see Kristie's face! Nice chapter. ;)
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Re: The Return of Brooks - Our Brody's in Love Update #2 01/25/16
« Reply #777 on: January 26, 2016, 10:45:07 AM »
Awwww, Brody and Kristie's first kiss!  <3
That "Attempt to seduce" social never fails to crack me up, though. Isn't that what Brody's doing after he asks her for a date?

Also, I'd like to ask an uninformed question.
I noticed in your Immortal Stats that you list the titles of cookbooks (for Zoey) but not their prices. Don't cookbooks have prices, too?

I hope Kristie turns out to be "the one" for Brody!

I've just never put them in, I forgot to input them there. Thanks for reminding me. As tiny as they are. LOL

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Re: The Return of Brooks - Our Brody's in Love Update #2 01/25/16
« Reply #778 on: January 26, 2016, 10:45:51 AM »
I was like...but her face, we need to see her face. Oh no.... don't tell me we aren't going to see Kristie's face! Nice chapter. ;)

Who me?? Pull a play? NEVA!! LOL
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Re: The Return of Brooks - Brody's Outing Update #1 01/26/16
« Reply #779 on: January 26, 2016, 04:31:09 PM »
Brody: *sighs* I am beginning to think you like your phone more then me.

Kristie: Oh don't be a silly ninnie. You kiss better then that old thing.



Brody: Well I hope so.. I think you are a pretty good kisser too.

Kristie: *blushes* Awww..



Brody: Where you going?

Kristie: Follow me sir.



*pulls into an embrace*

Kristie: I just wanted to feel your arms around me again.

Brody: No problems there. Anytime you want babe. .



Brody: But, *whispers* I can do you one better then that sweetness.

*kisses*



Kristie: *breathless* I love it when you kiss me Brody Brooks.

Brody: My pleasure.



Brody: Are you a campfire? Cause you're hot and I want s'more

Kristie: *giggles* Oh Brody. That was cute.



Brody: Excuse me miss, can I have the time? I'd check my watch but I can't take my eyes off you.

Kristie: *blushes*



Kristie: You sir are a flirty and I think I like it. *giggles*



Brody: There's always more where that came from.



*pulls something from pocket*

Kristie: What is that Brody?

Brody: Kristie, I know I haven't asked you to be my girlfriend yet, but I want to give you this promise ring. I promise to be yours and only yours.




Kristie: OH YES. Brody, I  promise when your ready, I'll be your girlfriend and I promise to be yours and only yours.



Kristie: I hate to leave now, but I do have to be up early in the morning. I'll see you at school.

Brody: Becareful babe. I'll see you at school.



Brody: I'm such as a smooth operator.

You just think you are.



Brody: Not even you can ruin my night.



Brody: I think I've just found my soul mate. She's prefect.



Kinley: Where have you been son? I've been worried.



Brody: Sorry mom, I was out with Kristie. I guess you can say she's my girl.

Kinley: Wow, my baby has a girlfriend. I hope you are treating her with respect.



Brody: What do you think mom? With you and dad as my role models. I know how to treat a girl.

Kinley: Smooth Talk will get you everywhere. LOL



Destiny: I heard my little nephew had a date. Who do I have hurt?

Brody: Easy Auntie, Kristie is a great girl.

Destiny: Oh that's good, I'll be watching her. Also, I found your stuff for your requirements. You can't complete the Bodybuilder stuff. The career is good, but you really should have talked to the watcher first.





Brody: Great, and here I was having a perfectly wonderful day. 



*splash*



Why the long face? Did she dump you?

Brody: *sighs* No, Aunt Destiny informed me that I had to rethink my goals for the Family.

Why?

Brody: According to the Laws of Metro Man or whoever he is, I can go into the Athletic Career, but I can't be a bodybuilder. *sighs*
 



*Yes I know, I got the promise rings before the "ask to be boyfriend/girlfriend" part. But I wanted to be different with the flow of my pictures for this part.
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